.greed challenge. “Sonja, ‘behaviour’
Very powerful. I like the clear, pared-down language and the simple but profound advice / instructions which the poem gives to the reader. The concept of gratitude at the heart of this piece is probably key to solving the problems of greed.” thanks Halls Writing Forum. Oxford.
while all is behaving nicely
around us, some place it is not.
think of this and feel lucky,
fortunate in your lot. be glad
that some know rules.
it can be an honour, the honesty,
i met her the other day,
by peoples greed, need to hurt
we shall meet for coffee.
meanwhile , some receive awards.