.second liar – the same picture.

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“Sonja: ‘second liar- the same picture’

This said a lot in very few words. I’m always impressed by Sonja’s ability to compress a powerful narrative into such a clear, concentrated essence. The rhythm and timing of this were great, and I was also intrigued by the phonetic spelling of ‘gradual’, which really brought home the meaning of this word in context.”

sonja benskin mesher

light    gentle   sweet

you touched my spine

your face no picture

slow    ɡradʒʊəl     inevitable

you killed me

one shot to the chest




with silver


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